February 12, 2010

Commentary - Influence - Part Five

CENTRAL PARK

So I moved up from December 2 up to the 12th based on two weeks passing, stated on the show. This finale takes place just as Samuel is defeated. It seems that after days of research, Trevor found the Carnival, too and was waiting for a chance. If you recall, he promised to take Amanda, but the reader doesn't really have to remember that. All the while, he remembers something Seal told him. When doesn't matter, why is what's important. It's the frame of Trevor's thoughts and the point of the chapter. In the opening, you supposed to be left wondering if Undaunted was broken up or not. Ultimately, that's up to speculation. I'd like to think it still lives on, because it's purpose still rings strong, to protect each other more so now that the cat's out of the bag.

UTAH

Continuing with chapter 4, Undaunted holds a meeting in Utah. And this was one of the last WTF moments I had left up my sleeve. Trevor kills Seal. But wait, it's not Seal. Then I sprinkle it the usual humor, his power at work, one last mission, and one last montage. I also couldn't help put in one more jab at HSG when Trevor doesn't care who it was that kidnapped Seal. Undaunted is in the crosshairs being the top faction, after all.

THE BEGINNING

I decided that Trevor's tale wouldn't end with violence and rage, that's how his story began, with the death of his love. And so I chose to start off with Trevor doing the mundane, the normal. Getting ready, shaving, dressing. And the final scene is how I wanted to end his tale from the start. Symbolically, he leaves his gun behind as a gesture. He's committed to changing along with hopefully the world in light of what Claire did in Central Park. I wanted to keep the final shot on the gun, not Trevor, to suggest also a separation of character. The gun is the old Trevor and walking away out of frame is someone new, changed for the better, after all this time; manifesting his power, going insane, falling in love, hunting Primatech, and joining Undaunted. And it's a mark that maybe there's hope that there won't be a need for the old Trevor.

So yes, this is the last story you've read about Trevor. I've got nothing left. But maybe I'll be inspired again as the franchise chugs on. We'll see. It was a blast to get my creative energies revved up again and creating this character who has his own small role in Heroes, but like most, everyone has their own story to tell. I hope I've entertained and intrigued those that have kept up and read these stories. I want to thank HERO for consulting with me about Seal over these past months. I also want to thank Phthisis, Azuteor, Yuriko, symbiotic, Heroes360, and everyone else for the kind words.

February 11, 2010

Part Six - Influence - Part Five

DECEMBER 12, 2007

CENTRAL PARK, NEW YORK

"We were there to provide protection. Help folks get unstuck and return to a normal life. If it ain't our doing then someone else will make it so we're…Obsolete. Our purpose was to make it so the folks don't need us."

A television is switched on with Claire Bennet's face plastered on the screen. A sub-title flashes screen, "Man arrested identified as Samuel Sullivan, owner of the carnival."

[Volume Six "Brave New World"]

"Coyote Sands. Primatech. Pinehearst. Building 26. The Carnival. They meddled with the world. But in a way, I have to thank them. They made perfect strangers work together for a common cause."

Books, files, papers, and maps are scattered on the floor and furniture. Some that can be made out are a headline about a town falling into a massive sink hole. Another print out shows an aerial view of the Carnival. A Primatech logo and photo of Amanda Strazzulla is visible on a third.

[Volume 5]

"I hope it was a good situation while it lasted."

Trevor Tanaka is standing amid the papers in a room in the Sherry-Netherland hotel, overlooking Central Park. He has a five days' worth of facial hair. In the background outside the window, the Sullivan Bros. Carnival lights up the park but more so police lights and flashes of reporters now. Despite the clutter of work, the room is spacious and evokes a timeless European luxury.

Trevor - "Claire Bennet, did you just save the world? Or doom it further?"

Trevor turns off the television. He stares into the blank screen.

Trevor - "She'll be a shiny new toy to them. At first. Then we go from Astro Boy to Frankenstein in a blink of the eye."

[Volume 2 "The Line"]

DECEMBER 2, 2007

DESOLATION CANYON, UTAH

James and Trevor teleport in with the group of posthumans from last chapter; Darren Summers, Ilja Vanderslagmolen, Daniel Stehlik, Maxxine Falcone, Amber Reed, Jennifer McAllister, Morgan Harvey, Chuck Cox, Erika Stevens, and Brian Cain. James walks up to Seal, Marc, Sparkplug, and Slipshod. Sparkplug says something to him. James nods and teleports away. Seal walks up to Trevor. Trevor seems distracted. He holds up his hand. Seal shakes it.

Trevor - "Very canyon-y."

Seal - "They call it Desolation Canyon."

Trevor - "Great place to boost morale."

Seal - "I thought you'd get a kick out of it."

Trevor - "I'd have taken Tanya and Eloise out here for a vacation."

Seal - "You and vacations?"

Trevor unbuttons his trench coat.

James reappears in the background with more people. Several seconds later, Clara does, too. Everyone is now present.

Seal - "The greater a man's talents, the greater his power to lead astray. It is better that one should suffer than that many should be corrupted."

[Brave New World, Aldous Huxley]

Seal holds out Trevor's briefcase and rips out the secret compartment. The two red files tumble out. Murmurs buzz around the crowd.

Seal - "Good things can't last. We were supposed to protect each other. Now, we're doing things behind each other's backs. Sending out secret messages. Going on undercover missions. That's not us. We don't get each other killed."

Some agreement and confusion circulate among the crowd. Seal takes it in and tries to calm everyone down. Trevor stays where is and doesn't flinch. Sparkplug and Clara half-glance at Trevor.

Seal - "I think it's still worthwhile to protect each other, but in smaller groups and we can still stay in contact with each other."

"Is he disbanding the faction?"

"No way!"

"I think's it's the right thing to do."

"This is total bull-"

"I bet it's all Trevor's fault."

Seal - "No, this is all on me. I'm your leader, I should have been the one to make the hard decisions but I put too much weight on you all. I'm sorry. I let everyone down."

There is silence. Trevor walks forward. Seal looks at him.

Trevor - "You're not Seal."

"What?!"

"Is he nuts?!"

"Of course, that's him!!"

Without warning, Trevor pulls out his gun and shoots Seal in the head. Seal falls over, instantly dead.

"I knew it, he's a double agent!"

"Get him!!"

Trevor - "He's not Seal. He was a shape shifter."

"But look, it's still Seal!"

Trevor - "Shape shifters manipulate their DNA permanently. They don't just shift back to their original appearance when they die. You were all subjected to bad writing in the 90's."

"Well prove it."

Trevor - "Have you seen the final season of Highlander?"

"Get him!!"

Trevor - "Seal walks with his right shoulder slightly forward from his left and walks at a two degree slouch. He walked straight. He shaked my hand. I never shake anyone's hand. I told Seal my daughter's name would have been Elisha if she was born. He didn't correct me when I called her Eloise. Seal quotes television. He quoted literature. Seal's eyes are brown. His were blue."

The crowd calms down a little. But things are still tense.

"How're you going to find Seal?"

"Yeah, you just killed our only lead!!"

Trevor - "Among this crowd of 200 posthumans, there has to be a clairvoyant. A locator? Really? None? Look at the soles of his shoes. This dirt caked in isn't indicative of Utah. Ultisols are the dominant soils in the American South, where the Cecil series is most famous, southeastern China, southeast Asia and some other subtropical and tropical areas. Their northern limit, except fossil soils, is very sharply defined in North America by the limits of maximum glaciation during the Pleistocene because Ultisols typically take hundreds of thousands of years to form - far longer than the length of an interglacial period today."

Silence.

Trevor - "The dirt has faint smell of poultry, swine, peanuts, and cattle. Three main staples of North Carolina and Georgia, where red clay soil is found. Peanuts are strictly from Georgia."

Fake Seal's body makes a sound.

Trevor - "Excuse me."

Trevor delivers his signature second shot.

Trevor - "So…who's up for a field trip?"

UNDAUNTED - in Heroes title font - graces across the sky.

INFLUENCE - PART FIVE: FEELING- in Heroes title font - pasted on the red clay soil

DECEMBER 12, 2007

SAVANNAH, GEORGIA

Close up on Seal, presumably, with a bag over his head, tied up on a chair. He hears two people talking.

"They're coming."

Seal exhales.

HEROES theme plays as montage sequence begins. The electricity in the building begins to dimmers. Outside, Trevor is shooting. The camera is at a slower speed. Bullets rip into other posthumans. Trevor turns and throws a knife into another's head off-screen. Back in the building, lightning streams out of the light bulbs and attacks the two guards. Sparkplug appears and unmasks Seal. He quickly works to untie him. Azuteor is surrounded on all sides. He easily flips them all into the distance with his gravity repulsion. Sparkplug and Seal burst out the door. Trevor has his cellphone to his ear, kneeling at the building's base. Clara appears. Trevor clicks a device then everyone teleports away. Ten seconds later, the building explodes.

DESOLATION CANYON, UTAH

FIVE MINUTES, 29 SECONDS LATER

Seal - "Thanks. So who were those guys?"

Seal drinks bottled water. Trevor replaces his gun's clip. Fake Seal's body is a short distance away from them.

Trevor - "Who cares? It's a new enemy every week."

[HSG]

Seal - "So that was me, huh?"

Trevor - "Yep."

Seal - "How'd you know it wasn't me?"

Trevor - "I had a feeling. I'd have felt really stupid if I were wrong."

Seal chuckles.

DECEMBER 12, 2007

CENTRAL PARK, NEW YORK

Trevor is finishing shaving in the bathroom. He applies aftershave. Unknown time passes. He walks out in with a dress shirt, tie, and slacks on. Trevor stands in front of a full body mirror and finishes his tie. He looks down at his cufflinks to make sure they are straight. Trevor looks over to a night stand were a holster and his gun is waiting. He puts it on then his suit jacket hanging. He walks over to his coat hanger and puts on a black trench coat and black fedora. With the camera now pointed at his back. Trevor exhales then turns around. The camera, from his point of view, sees the room, now completely cleaned up of his research and/or clutter. Trevor bends at the knees and picks up a briefcase. He switches off the light and leaves.

DECEMBER 13, 2007

AOYAMA, JAPAN

Trevor - "This is the way it all ends, not with a bang, not with some casual incident, but in sustained reflection."

[George Santayana, on the Divine Comedy]

The camera zooms out. Trevor is talking to the headstone of his fiancée, Tanya, in the Aoyama Cemetery. He bends down and touches it. Trevor walks away, disappearing under the camera. The camera slowly, steadily, zooms in on the grave until the characters are legible. Then it stares down. Trevor's gun is resting on her headstone.

THE BEGINNING

February 1, 2010

Commentary - Influence - Part Four

I always wanted to play with a mundane scene and follow it up with a big explosion. That's essentially the genesis of Ezekiel's day. He seems like a normal, run-of-the-mill guy but he's got issues like the rest of us. He proposes to his girlfriend, she flips out and leaves him. He's pissed. He explodes. Kills a lot of people. But...since this takes place hand in hand with the events of iStory, everyone is spared indirectly thanks to John Mulligan. Luckily, one of them is Trevor whose power kicks in and he rewrites the future.

Aside from throwing in some cameos and tasers, I wanted this story to be a critique on Trevor and contrast him with someone with a similar past. Then lay that on top of this build up of what's Seal gonna say at this meeting. James plays the on-edge person chomping at the bit to know what's going to happen, sort of filtered through the reader's point of view. And for the keen eye, some neat references; Ted Sprague, the Exploding Man, Hulk, Haitian Pills, and so on. So, Green River, eh? Better get Googling.

Part Six - Influence - Part Four

DECEMBER 2, 2007

NEW YORK, NEW YORK

The camera frame opens on a close up of a digital alarm clock. It reads 6:59 AM. It changes to 7:00 AM. A song by Chaka Khan plays.

A man is sleeping on his stomach with a blanket half on. He is wearing a white, plain T-shirt and light blue boxers. He groans and mumbles something to himself. He maneuvers his left hand but knocks over the clock. It falls to the floor and keeps playing.

Bathroom. The man splashes water on his face. He towel dries his face, brushes his teeth, and shaves off his 5 day stubble. The shower curtain pulls over.

Nightstand. Picture frames are laying down. The man appears and checks his shave. He is dressed in black and gray with a scarf, cardigan, and slacks. He walks over and bends down and shuts off the clock (and the music). He makes his bed then pulls a pair of loafers from under the bed.

A small kitchen table. Close up on him eating a bowl of plain cereal. A glass of orange juice is nearby. The camera rotates to see what he is watching. It is a news channel replaying footage of the Nathan Petrelli flight crash. Words; Accident, Suicide, and Sabotage stream across the lower half of the television. He drinks the juice and sets it down. He stands up, puts the dishes in the sink, and rinses them.

The man walks to his door. He looks around at his apartment then locks the door.

DMV

The man stands in the renewal line. A photo flash goes off. He goes to the desk and gets his driver's license card back.

NEW YORK PUBLIC LIBRARY

He returns several books to the front desk and pays a small fine.

The man walks up a sidewalk. He buys an apple from a corner open market, polishes it, and eats it. He throws the core away in the trash can despite abundant litter on the road. He checks his wristwatch then pulls his sleeve back down.

As he sees a crosswalk, it captures his attention and he speeds up his walking pace. He bumps past several people. He then bumps past Trevor. At the crosswalk, he holds his hand out. Two rings fall, in slow motion, the camera follows them downward. The rings clink as they hit the ground. The camera looks up at the man.

"Boom."

His eyes light red and an explosion erupts from his body.

Trevor reaches into his trench coat for his gun but it's too late. The blast reaches him and blows him backwards. The camera is pointed down on Trevor. There are cuts on his forehead, blood pooled around his ears, and a distorted ringing sound. He is shell shocked. Trevor looks around. He sees his cell phone ringing but can't hear the ring. He tries to reach for it but can't. Unknown time passes.

A paramedic arrives over him. Trevor's vision focuses on the man. It is Hesam, Peter Petrelli's partner.

Hesam - "Sir!! You've been in injured in a terrorist attack!! Tell me your name!!"

Trevor - "Can I be me?"

Hesam - "Do you know your name?! Your name!!"

Hesam is checking his vitals and unpacking his kit.

Hesam - "What do you do for a living?!"

Trevor - "I protect people."

Hesam - "You're a cop?!"

Suddenly Hesam is muted, Trevor can't hear him anymore. Someone walks behind Hesam. It is the man who blew up. His clothes are tattered. Trevor shakingly holds up his right hand in the shape of a gun and shoots. Trevor's arm drops to the ground. Trevor is dead. Hesam exhales. Then the screen pauses on Hesam's exhale. Time and the scene begin to rewind.

Trevor is back to kneeling down and holding a pinwheel. He pauses and looks around then at the pinwheel and the girl. He remembers the explosion.

Trevor - You're getting a fruit basket, John Mulligan.

Trevor blows the pinwheel and returns it to the girl. She runs back to where she came. Trevor walks on. The man comes into view. He begins to walk faster. Trevor presses his lips and makes a move.

Trevor - "Hey, Steve, is that you?! Class of '03? It's me, Todd!"

Ezekiel - "Sorry, you got the wrong guy."

Trevor - "My mistake. You look just like someone I went to high school with."

Ezekiel - "I get that a lot for some…"

Trevor leans into him and tasers him. The man faints onto Trevor. No one notices (or cares for that matter).

Trevor - "That's how to stop an exploding man."

ONE HOUR, 24 MINUTES, 37 SECONDS LATER

KAHO'OLAWE ISLAND, HAWAI'I

UNDAUNTED - in Heroes title font - graces across the panel.

INFLUENCE - PART FOUR: FAMILIAR- in Heroes title font - pasted on the ground

Ezekiel wakes up in shock. The Sun beats down on him. He looks around.

Trevor - "No, we're not in New York, anymore."

Ezekiel turns around and sees Trevor leaning against a boulder.

Ezekiel - "You. You kidnapped me!"

Trevor - "You were going to kill a lot of people. Would you rather I take this gun, hold it out like this and pull the trigger?"

Ezekiel - "Kill people? I don't know what…"

Trevor readies his gun.

Ezekiel - "You're making me angry. You wouldn't like me when I'm angry."

Trevor - "Are you going to turn green and pummel me?"

[Marvel Comics - The Hulk]

Ezekiel tries to use his power but nothing happens. Trevor shoots. No bullets loaded.

Ezekiel - "Are you crazy?!"

Trevor - "Yes."

Ezekiel - "…Terrific."

Trevor - "Crazy enough to spare your life, take you to the other side of the United States, and force feed you a special cocktail of pills. You have a power. The ability of self-detonation. I have a power, enhanced memory. You were in a high emotional state and wanted to just vent on an uncaring world."

Ezekiel - "How?"

Trevor tosses the two rings to him.

Trevor - "You killed me. But luckily, there happened to be a time manipulator with his own problems, too. He rewinded time a few minutes and luckily I remembered what happened and neutralized you before you could blow us all away."

Ezekiel - "Say I believe all this. What now?"

Trevor - "She wasn't worth it. Too immature. Doesn't know what she wants from life. Only cares about going out and losing herself in nightclubs. You deserve better. Try a brunette next time. You're also a size 12 and a half but since they're so hard to find, you force yourself to wear 12's."

Trevor tosses Ezekiel's wallet back to him. Ezekiel laughs.

Ezekiel - "Who are you?"

Trevor - "I am many things. Today, I'm your guardian angel. Are you ready to go back to your life and move forward?"

Ezekiel rests his head on his right hand and nods.

Trevor - "Good."

James Kelly comes up behind Ezekiel and tasers him. He faints again.

Trevor - "See, it is fun, isn't it?"

James - "Helping people?"

Trevor - "No, the tasering part."

James - "…"

Trevor - "Give it back."

They teleport back to New York into Ezekiel 's apartment. Trevor sits him down on a sofa.

James - "You can handle him from here, right? I have to go down to…"

Trevor - "The Lower East Side? Don't waste too much time. The meeting is at 8."

James - "Wouldn't miss it for the world."

James teleports away.

Trevor is about to leave when he sees the nightstand. He picks up one of the picture frames.

Trevor - "Like quicksilver in the hand."

[Dorothy Parker - "Love is like quicksilver in the hand. Leave the fingers open and it stays. Clutch it, and it darts away."]

Trevor puts down the frame and walks out the door. As he enters the hallway, Emma Coolidge walks past Trevor. She doesn't make eye contact at all.

Trevor - "Don't bother holding the elevator for me."

LOWER EAST SIDE, NEW YORK

Darren Summers, Ilja Vanderslagmolen, Daniel Stehlik, Maxxine Falcone, Amber Reed, Jennifer McAllister, Morgan Harvey, Chuck Cox, Erika Stevens, Brian Cain, and James Kelly are gathered in Kelly's apartment room. Trevor enters.

[HSG - New York and New Jersey-based members]

James - "Everyone made it."

Trevor - "Let's start then. You're needed elsewhere, too."

James - "Where are we going?"

Trevor - "Green River, Utah."

James presses Trevor for more.

James - "What's going to happen? Is Undaunted going active again or is Seal going to…"

The group looks on intently for Trevor's answer.

Trevor - "There is…one thing we can do. The happiest people are those who can do it to the limit of their ability. We can be completely present. We can be all here. We can…give all our attention to the opportunity before us. Let's not speculate."

[Mark Van Doren]

Trevor puts his right hand on James shoulder. The others walk toward James and place one of their hands on James as well. He closes his eyes with a smile.

James - "Let's not."

They teleport away.

TO BE CONTINUED…